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Praying For Better Days

People can't even show
any respect these days,
Hurting each other
in so many ways;
taking many things
for granted;
Never sparing a thought
for those who have nothing.

Acting like they're the only people
whose lives are a misery;
what about those
suffering from poverty?
They can't even get a proper education,
but everyone deserves to
have a dream,
To one day succeed.

Some people only
care about themselves,
Not feeling any remorse
for those that are dying;
Not caring about the circumstances
in which they are living;
I guess they've never
heard of the term,
"It's better to
give than receive."

How can someone
be so mean?
Why can't they just
help those children in need?
Make a difference
in their life,
so they no longer
have to bleed,
It wouldn't hurt to
do one good deed.

Make the world
a better place;
Stop judging one another
on religion and race,
Come together
and embrace;
Do something simple,
Like putting a smile
on someone's face.
I wrote this because of the way some people act towards each other. There are a few people I know, who don't show any respect towards their elders. :cry:
I just thought I'd let my feelings out by writing the way I felt about their actions.

I hope you guys enjoy reading it and please let me know if you like it or not, any feedback is appreciated! :D
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Well said! I totally agree!
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:iconsimbalonso:
Simbalonso Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you agree :)
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:iconshep4life:
shep4life Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime!
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:iconartluvr4life:
artluvr4life Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this poem. It really says a lot.
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:iconsimbalonso:
Simbalonso Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you like it :hug:.
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:iconvettel1992:
Vettel1992 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very thoughtful. Expressing a lot of emotions through powerful words. Great job. :clap:
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:iconsimbalonso:
Simbalonso Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks mate, it means a lot :) :huggle:
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NeverlandApple Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
I really like it and agree 100%
thanks for sharing your thoughts ♡
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:iconsimbalonso:
Simbalonso Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the feedback my good friend! :D :handshake:
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:iconneverlandapple:
NeverlandApple Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
You're welcome :hug: !
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